Professional workers like doctors, nurses and teachers make a greater contribution to society and so should be paid more than sports and entertainment personalities.   To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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as nurses should be paid more than celebrities, others have

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idea and suggest that sportspersons and entertainers deserve more

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than professional workers. I hold the view that the

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of each group should be based on

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services that they provide rather than

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ame of their

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. On the one hand, many people affirm that essential jobs should be paid a high salary. Since these professions are dealing with public health or

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uture of society, professionals deserve the highest possible payment. While it is unanimously agreed that they should be quite well off, comparing their

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with celebrities does not seem appropriate.

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the

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of a teacher is vital for training our children, their

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is much less than a successful professional

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player,

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, the number of teachers in society is much more than

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rofessional

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player, which

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the difference in

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. The total

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of all teachers

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many times more than all of

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occer players.

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, face values,

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as sportspersons and entertainment personalities are distinguished and unique in what they do. The payment for every career is determined by the uniqueness of

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ob; were more people able to do a

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, their salary would be lower.

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, many people after proper training can be a nurse, whereas million youngster start playing

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every year; a few have the chance to play in

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league team

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only one will become Messi.

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reason justifies the very high incomes of face values. It is logical to conclude that it would not be appropriate to judge the

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of a worker by the area he or she is giving the service, rather than their salary should be based on the peculiarity of their work. I personally believe that the person who is talented enough to be unique

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a high

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, yet he or she may be a surgeon who performs a unique surgery, or an entertainer who enchants millions of people. I

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suggest that

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of the

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of every profession, stress should be on

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utcome; in

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to the services that they provide rather than the name of

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rofession.