Professional workers like doctors, nurses and teachers make a greater contribution to society and so should be paid more than sports and entertainment personalities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
While many hold the belief that professional careers
such
as nurses should be paid more than celebrities, others have contradicting
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income
than professional workers. I hold the view that the income
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with celebrities does not seem appropriate. For example
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of a teacher is vital for training our children, their income
is much less than a successful professional soccer
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It is logical to conclude that it would not be appropriate to judge the income
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