Without capital punishments (the health penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increases. Capital punishment in essential to control violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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modernized world, the people are suffering from many challenges.

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to the rise in

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criminal activities. Some people opine that the atrocity can be managed by involving a high

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of fine which helps to acquire

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safety and peaceful life. I strongly support

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view. The essay will discuss my stance with the arguments in

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elow paragraphs.

To begin

with, the predominant reason to impose the new law which takes the

money

from the culprit is that create an image of having a straight law.

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will stop the criminal to attempt the wrong activity as they have to pay the

amount

of it as living in

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jail for a certain

amount

of time is not enough.

Moreover

, having a simple punishment will encourage the captive to do the wrong activity.

Although

people in the cites feel unsecure,

this

will be controlled by imposing these new rules.

For example

, many teenagers are not attempting some cybercrime activity as they are doing

this

only for their fun and have to pay a large

amount

.

Furthermore

, after taking

this

money

, the authorities can use it for the citizens

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a better life. Even they can start a free program which helps the person to improvise their life if they are suffering from any problems.

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money

can be utilized to provide

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education and food for the needed people, which

also

reduce

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criminal activities over the globe.

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, research conducted shows that

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most criminals are doing the offence due to having less

money

and food which can be solved by

this

money

. In conclusion, as per my opinion, by imposing stricter rules which acquire the

money

from the criminal create the fear of the governments. Even

this

money

can be used to provide the services which

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the atrocity over the globe.