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Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is by reducing the maximum speed limits on vehicle, others think there are other better ways. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Reducing vehicle's speed could be a good idea to decrease accidents over the highway while other people believe that other
safety
 measure can help better to minimise the car clashes. I endorse the
second
 idea as all the
safety
 signs should be followed
instead
 of just focusing on speed.
First
 of all, speed is considered
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ain accident causer as
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ainly young adult have
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craze over the speed which most of the time result in life taking accidents.
Although
,
overspeeders
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over speeders
over spenders
 create a dangerous environment over the
road
 for other drivers as well.
Therefore
, by putting maximum speed limit signs over the
road
 can be of great help to maximise the
safety
 over the
road
 because it will act as
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 reminder to reduce speed over specific street or highway.
Nevertheless
, other
safety
 signs are of equal importance when we talk about improving
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road
safety
.
Furthermore
, a driver should have proper knowledge about the
road
 signs. A safe vehicle is
also
 important. A driver should always do
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houlder check before changing the lane to reduce the chances of car clash.
Moreover
, all the restrictions on the license should be followed.
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 the end, it can be said that overspeeding is one of the main reasons
of
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 happening accidents but it is not the only one. There are plenty of
road
 signs, instructions which are specified on different kind of roads which should be followed by all drivers for their own and other
road
 user's
safety
.
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