Lectures were used to be a way to teach large number of students, but with the technology available for education, there is no longer justification for lectures. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Lectures which were once in a fashion to teach many students in a group
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would be replaced by
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atest innovations in technology.
As a result
, lectures can no longer be justified in
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contemporary world.
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with
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view and I intend to justify it in the following paragraphs.
First
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ole of a lecture is not limited up to making
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available for the students. They have a crucial role in making the students understand any topic. While taking classes for the pupils, a
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lecturer
keep every student's requirement in mind and modify
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difficulty level as per the aptitude of the students in the class.
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much easy to ask a doubt with the teachers as compared to
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a teacher can find out where a student facing problem in understanding, but a computer will never be able to have one to one interaction with a student to solve their queries. On contrary, numerous people are of the opinion that teaching in groups is old fashioned and can not be justified in
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urrent
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technology
era.
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of websites are
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any
information
whenever and wherever he/she wants.
However
,
this
logic is not reasonable for the technologies to bypass
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raditional way of teaching, as most of the people have difficulty in finding out
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eliable source of
information
amongst numerous online sources.
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is not
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and is based on
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opinion of someone.
In addition
to that, 30% of the available
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can not be trusted and lack proper references. To conclude, while looking superficially it looks like digital platforms have the capabilities to surpass old traditional way of teaching through lectures, thorough examination
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ruled out
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omputer and all the
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