Some people think that studying history is a waste of time while others think it is essential to learn history. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

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essential for an individual to learn about
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of their origin or
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in my opinion it is vital to study past. At the outset, many parents want their children should learn and understand the culture and ritual of their
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, in many Asian countries like India which was not independent centuries ago, it is very much important to know how that
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got independence.
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it can be seen new generation is not following old mythology and festivals, so it is vital every school should provide education from an early age because they can pass the knowledge to upcoming generations.
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, it is essential to learn about
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and the past.
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, certain people believe nowadays where all the relevant information is available on the internet there is no reason to learn
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. Children should focus to develop other major skills like communication or to focus on computer science. As an illustration, it can be clearly seen in many western countries like Australia and US where schools and colleges are not teaching about the origin of the
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, that how an island like Australia formed in-to a
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it is a developed
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, many people think it is just a waste of resources and time. In my opinion, it is vital to learn about
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ast reflects the ethic of a
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, many
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travels from countries like New Zealand or the US to India just to explore practice,
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, and culture.
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helping
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eveloping nation to build their gross domestic product because much overseas organisation are investing just to preserve
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beauty. It can be concluded learning past is not a waste of time. One should take into consideration the pros of both their home
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and on the public. Studying
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should not be overlooked and well handled.
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