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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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In
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 century, languages are really important to communicate with others. Many people believe that to live or work abroad person should learn a foreign voice and that only the reason to learn
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 speech, Whilst others think that there are many reasons to learn these foreign languages. I am of the belief that speaks many languages has many advantages. In
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 essay, I will discuss those views and give my opinion.
Firstly
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, why many people say that the main and only reason to learn a foreign accent is to
travel
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 or work in
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 country speak
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language
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; they think that the person who want to speak languages not his voice want to communicate with people who speak
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 speech every day without any delay.
For example
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, many people in Egypt learn Germany
language
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 to gain a chance to leave Egypt and stay in Germany.
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, they want to learn a voice,not their native accent only to
travel
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 there.
Secondly
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, some people on the other side of
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 view above and say that there are many reasons to learn languages.
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, they believe that learning foreign
language
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 expand their mentality and to connect with the native speaker without
travel
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.
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, may people around the world now learning the Chinese
language
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 because they want to make a deal for import goods without
travel
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 or live in China.
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, learning a foreign
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 helps in may aspects
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 as import goods. In conclusion , there are two different people thinking about a foreign
language
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. The
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 ones are who think the only reason for
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 action to
travel
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 abroad or work in these nations, others say that
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 activity has many reasons not only to
travel
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 there. In my opinion, learn languages expand the mentality and help to know other cultures.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • multilingual
  • linguistic proficiency
  • globalized world
  • cross-cultural communication
  • immersive experience
  • adaptability
  • cultural exchange
  • interpersonal skills
  • employment prospects
  • empathy
  • intellectual development
  • overcome language barriers
  • global market
  • resourceful
  • life-changing
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