Some people say that online study is more effective than traditional learning. Do advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

Learning types has become a debatable subject in the modern world. Whilst some argue that online study

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more effective, others are against

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essay will support that the advantages of remote learning outweigh the disadvantages.

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, studying online is more affordable for students and saves facility cost for universities. It is more effective for students to learn from the comfort of their home as

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approach requires

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expenses. Students are only required to attend classes using their laptops rather than commuting to the university thereby saving expenses.

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educational survey shows that 70% of student opted to learn remotely

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because of the cost constraints.

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, remote learning reduces the facility expenses for educational institutions because schools would

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require less space to function.

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, the University of Melbourne saves millions of dollars on their facilities because most of their enrollees opt for

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courses.

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, there is little evidence that

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that home study is less effective as it reduces social interactions amongst individuals. Unlike campus learning were people are able to interact daily, off-campus learning requires little or no interaction with course mates thereby making people

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, a mental health survey showed that 65% of students became depressed because they had little friends. In summary, it can be seen that

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there are drawbacks to learning from home, it is far more advantageous than campus study. It is

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important for the government to encourage and support remote courses because of the

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to the society at large.