*EG 2. Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.* *Discuss both views and give your opinion.*

Certain persons have the notion that

advertisement

has become so ordinary that it is no longer paid attention to, due to the fact that almost every

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in the market are now being advertised and marketers

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this

medium to force people into buying things they do not have need of; while others argue that

advertisement

of goods is so necessary

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convincing people into purchasing

such

product

because it is less expensive and ensures wider information distribution of the

product

among the people. I support

this

opinion.

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has become so popular that every

product

in the market

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now being advertised, creating an impression of insecurity of the manufacturer in the mind of the public. Each producer thinks that if his

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is not advertised, it's rivalry's would outshine his own and

this

thus

causes chaos in the

advertisement

industry.

Moreover

, some producers go as far as using the face of popular celebrities on their products and

this

drives people into buying their products even if they don't have need of them. To exemplify, in

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recent research conducted by market surveyors' union, it was noted that the number of

advertisement

of a

product

is rapidly increasing at a very fast rate, thereby decreasing its value and waning down the interest of the consumers. I

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however

, do not subscribe to

this

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.

On the other hand

,

advertisement

is considered to be

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and I concur to

this

opinion because

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with a smaller amount of money, advertising reaches many people,

therefore

increasing the sale of the

product

. It

also

creates a medium for a faster exchange of information between the manufacturer and the consumer. Any change in quality can be made known by the consumer to the producer through feedback and review. In the same

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, the manufacturers through advertising can change the habit and prejudice of the customer.

For instance

, a friend of mine who launched a new book about

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was able to make a very good number of sales within a short period of time through advertising it.

Thus

, advertising brings a

product

into

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imelight with a reduced cost and

also

triggers the interest of the people. In conclusion, it is argued that

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dvertisement of goods is crucial in ensuring faster sales of the

product

. I agree

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opinion because advertising does not require much cost and it

also

enables information to get to the public faster.