A friend has written to you asking for advice about a problem at work. You have had a similar problem in the past. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: tell your friend you understand the problem explain what happened to you in the past suggest a possible solution to this problem.
Dear Mathew,
Hope you are doing fine. I was on cloud nine when I heard that you got a college placement in a reputed
company
. Congratulations on this
achievement! Also
, you wrote Add an article
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to me
tome
about your struggle of getting settled Correct your spelling
to me
at
a new place.
Buddy, I understand Change preposition
in
this
situation and it happened to me as well when I moved to another company
. I candidly remember the time of probation period when I was not aware of company
structure and departments because of this
I reported my work to a
wrong person many times. Correct article usage
the
Moreover
, I was afraid to ask questions and used to interact less with my peers. So, you can co-relate these problems with yours. Now you can imagine it is been 3 years in the same company
, and I successfully passed my hard time.
I would like to advice
you to do open communication with your manager and team members. Replace the word
advise
Also
, you should ask someone for help, and in case, you do not complete your work on time because of pressure, talk to your superior so he can reduce your load. Do not forget to clear your confusion if you cant
understand the Correct your spelling
can't
company
's structure. I hope these suggestions would work for you. A
simple Correct pronoun usage
This a
advice
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piece of advice
to
not take much stress and do your work with dedication.
Write to me if you need some help Add a missing verb
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further
.
Best wishes,
SmilySubmitted by smily446 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite