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A friend has written to you asking for advice about a problem at work. You have had a similar problem in the past. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: tell your friend you understand the problem explain what happened to you in the past suggest a possible solution to this problem.

#friend #advice #work
Dear Mathew, Hope you are doing fine. I was on cloud nine when I heard that you got a college placement in a reputed
company
. Congratulations on
this
 achievement!
Also
, you wrote
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to me
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tome
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 about your struggle of getting settled
at
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 a new place. Buddy, I understand
this
 situation and it happened to me as well when I moved to another
company
. I candidly remember the time of probation period when I was not aware of
company
 structure and departments because of
this
 I reported my work to
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 wrong person many times.
Moreover
, I was afraid to ask questions and used to interact less with my peers. So, you can co-relate these problems with yours. Now you can imagine it is been 3 years in the same
company
, and I successfully passed my hard time. I would like to
advice
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 you to do open communication with your manager and team members.
Also
, you should ask someone for help, and in case, you do not complete your work on time because of pressure, talk to your superior so he can reduce your load. Do not forget to clear your confusion if you
cant
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 understand the
company
's structure. I hope these suggestions would work for you.
A
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 simple
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to
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 not take much stress and do your work with dedication. Write to me if you need some help
further
. Best wishes, Smily
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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