Your organized flight has been canceled. Write a letter to the airline company. You should 1) complain about the situation, 2) request what you need from them to make a travel insurance claim, 3) suggest what they should do in future situations.

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Dear Sir or Miss, I'm writing to complain about the

flight

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I booked with your company

this

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morning. My name is Tina, I had an important meeting

this

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afternoon in New York City. I scheduled my

flight

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plan on

this

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aeroplane

last

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week in advance.

Flight

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No. is 12345.

This

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morning, when I arrived at the airport, your colleague said the plane had some security issue emergency, and it had to be cancelled for security considerations.

Furthermore

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, I was angry that they could not provide an alternative aeroplane for our

flight

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, and

as a result

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, I had to take a bus to go to my destination rashly.

Although

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I caught up on my meeting.but

this

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journey has caused me exhausted all day. I require your company to return the money for my ticket price as soon as possible because I bought travel insurance when I booked the

flight

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ticket. Kindly

although

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I can understand that some emergencies are hard to arrange and predict in advance, I think your company should manage and establish alternative plans in different situations. I look forward to your response. Yours, Tina.

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Task Achievement

Consider adding more details or context about the meeting or the inconvenience caused by the flight cancellation to enhance your complaint.

Coherence and Cohesion

Use more cohesive devices (like linking words) to improve the flow of your ideas within and between paragraphs.

Coherence and Cohesion

Make sure to clearly separate your ideas into distinct paragraphs, with each paragraph focusing on one single idea.

Task Achievement

The letter has a clear purpose and states the complaint effectively.

Task Achievement

You maintain a polite tone, which is suitable for such correspondence.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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5
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

186 words

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The Closing

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