It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is best both for the individual and for society. Do you agree or disagree?
It is widely argued by some sections of society that weddings should happen before the bride or groom turn 30 years old, while a few people disagree to
this
by stating that there is no time frame to get married. In my opinion, marriages should happen between the age of 25 to 30 years, as Linking Words
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the right time for a person to settle down, and women may develop postpartum difficulties after they turn 31.
If a person is career-oriented and attains a well-paid job by the age of 25, he will have sufficient income to take care of his own family, the same goes with women as well. Linking Words
This
should be enough for a couple to follow their dreams together, Linking Words
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in case they plan for children only after a few years of oneness. They will have more space for togetherness, which can be utilized in travelling and other activities that help them to understand each other better. Linking Words
For example
, in arranged marriages in India, the bride and groom meet respective spouses only on the day of their nuptials, which gives them fewer moments in knowing one another.
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On the other hand
, if people tie the knot after a certain age they may develop physical issues like complications during and post-pregnancy. It is very common in women to have permanent or long term changes in their bodies, which may not bee visible if the delivery was at the right maturity. Linking Words
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, in a recent survey conducted by Child Health Organization, 64% of babies born prematurely are a result of late pregnancies. Linking Words
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, it is advisable to have an early marriage and delivery.
To conclude, even though early marriages are preferred, most people prefer to have late marriages as it gives more time to earn. On one hand, Linking Words
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may seem quite healthy but they do not understand the complications that arise Linking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite