some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things, other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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It is now common knowledge that the advert of goods and services is a simple way of encouraging many to purchase wares, while others are of the notion that commercials have no impact on their choice of merchandise.
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I am of the opinion that these notices on wares impact our choices to a large extent. The advent of a new commodity brought to our notice either via social media or other means, directly or indirectly influence our choices because these items are registered in our subconscious.
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, when we go to the market place, we already have a biased mind and pick goods we recently came in contact with. Commercials
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have an effect on the children as they are easily impressed by the colourful schemes companies
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mploy. Children,
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enforce their parents to get a particular brand they saw recently.
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, a child who saw an advert of kiddies chocolate would immediately pick it up at any given opportunity and cry until its paid for.
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the persuasive effect of promotion on the mind, its an indirect approach which is highly productive.
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, promotions of goods are ignored entirely by some marketers because brands are promoted rather than the quality of products. A number of times, it has been found that the nature of items have been compromised, but remain in the market because of high demands following sales.
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, shea butter cream which had no place in the social media in the '90s,but had a very high moisturizing quality is now known all over for its branded name with poor quality. A number of junk food, cigarette and alcohol are
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put in the media, these promote bad choices in children,
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, parents may decide to put a ban on an advert in their homes. In conclusion, my opinion remains, commercials bring awareness of goods and services to our doorstep,
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, the pressure to be biased in the marketplace.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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