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In many developed countries, fast food is cheap and widely available. Many people tend to choose unhealthy options. Why do many people tend to choose unhealthy options? What can governments do to solve this problems?

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Nowadays, fast foods have invaded our lives by controlling majorly over teenager generations. Fast
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 has made addicted humans to its taste and
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 has become a part of the lifestyle and diet of the people. Despite researchers at universities finding evidence that,
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 trend is hazardous to our health, most citizens still tend to choose unhealthy fast
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nhealthy option and improvement methods. The advantages of fast
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 vary according to the segment of society in question. Individuals get enjoyment out of fast
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, the clearest evidence of which is its popularity. Fast
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 is
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 relatively cheap and saves time.
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, in many working-class families, parents spend a lot of time and energy at their job and do not have the luxury of preparing a nutritions, time-consuming meal for their children.
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, fast
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 is a necessary, viable alternative.
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, society benefit is a general sense because of employment opportunities. Fast
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 restaurants employ thousand of lowly paid workers and are a safe transitional job for students or struggling persons.
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, the negative impact of fast
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 is greater. The government should promote the disadvantages of fast
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 that cause irreparable harm to both their short and long-term health.
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, the government can public some research evidence which the high fat and sugar content in fast
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 not only affect daily energy levels but
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 increase the risk of dying,
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 as heart disease. In conclusion,
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 brings, the government should invest more in healthy school lunches and making healthy products more widely available to attack the problem at its root source.
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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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