Several people assert that the main cause of crime is an economically disadvantaged background. However, others say that crime is caused by a person's nature. Discuss both ideas and give your own opinion.

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issue but personally, I agree that the criminality has occurred by a poor economic background which involves poverty and the accompanied violent from parents.

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with, some people argue that the main cause of crimes is the offender's congenital temperament.

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because, some crooks tend to attack the public, having no reasons which could make unpredictable accidents.

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, many serial killers had injured animals, since their too young, followed by these experiences what would lead to

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human, it can be a case.

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, someones have worrisome ground about criminals' innate trait, which crimes could happen the unpredictable situation by.

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, others assume that most criminalities have occurred by social discrimination about family's property. When it comes to poverty, most offenders had gotten to a sense of isolated in school lives and house.

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, for those individual situations, most crooks could not learn appropriate education, so that they have to commit criminality several times for earning living expenses.

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, most frauds and thieves have

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similar personal circumstances as non-haves. In conclusion, offenders,

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among them having dangerous characters, are more likely to be changed their behaviour worse, after birth.

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, I feel that most criminals were decided by social-economic backgrounds rather than congenital traits. For those reasons, it is convincing that the governments and relevant school organizations should manage carefully student’s family circumstance.