Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these views and give our own opinion.

As more and more accidents are attributed to

traffic

offences, people have been wondering what yields a resolution to

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controversial concern. From my perspective, both rule-abiding methods and other solutions will guarantee the finer quality of

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option, which is to intensify the punishment, is believed to optimize the current state of

traffic

offences. The penalties represent in various kinds including small fines in cash, license or vehicle suspension or even prison sentences, all of which are applied with the aim of deterring vehicle owners from violating the laws. Indeed, the stricter the regulations are, the more prudent people will become as they know even

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slightest act of carelessness will result in significant consequences.

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, the money withdrawn from driving offenders would supplement the coffer/public treasury in order to enhance the road quality or community amenities.

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igh level of punishments not only raises the awareness of the public but

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upgrades the roads through the money confiscated.

On the other hand

, a number of other measures should be executed along with intensive punishment. As lots of tragic accidents are caused

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an insufficient breadth of

traffic

knowledge, proper education about transportation serves as a must for everyone.

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, children should be taught to always walk on the right-handed pavement while high school students, by no means, are able to drive before being eligible. On the societal level, advertising screens and banners, which report precisely the death toll and compelling slogans, are a great tool to propagandize road safety. If drivers catch sight of the well-illustrated reminders, they will refrain themselves from speeding or driving after drinking. In conclusion, a set of rules seriously done together with education and propaganda would have a crucial effect

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the hope of minimizing

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traffic

accidents to the least.