Some people believe that people have the right to university education, and government should make it free no matter what their financial background. To what extent do you agree or disagree
Numerous individuals are of the opinion that underprivileged family background is unable to pursue higher
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overnment should ensure that all the individuals from different financial strata Add an article
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gets
the opportunity to pursue higher Change the verb form
get
education
free of cost. This
essay agrees with this
view and I intend to justify it in the following paragraphs.
First
and foremost, education
is one amongst the most essential need of the contemporary world as it decides people's career. And higher cost of university education
will force lower strata people to quite it or they will not be able to get the admission. Therfore
, inequality amongst the society will increase and the rich will become richer and vice versa. Correct your spelling
Therefore
For instance
, if an individual fromAdd an article
an
education
then
he will not get a job. And hence
, it will further
result in d
ecline in his financial status.
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In addition
to that, unavailability of a
university Remove the article
apply
education
for the
poor people will increase the unemployment amongst them. And Remove the article
apply
hence
, there are high chances that they will indulge in criminal activities to sort out their financial issues. This
will cause disharmony in a
society. Remove the article
apply
For example
, studies show that 75% of the law breakers
did Correct your spelling
lawbreakers
c
rime so that they can resolve their life's problems which are due to the cash shortage.
To conclude, Add an article
the
g
overnment should fund the university Add an article
the
education
to make it free for everyone despite of
their financial status so that they have the equal rights of getting employment. Remove the preposition
apply
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eduction in Add an article
the
a
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reduces
the crime in the society.Change the verb form
reduce
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