Some people believe that people have the right to university education, and government should make it free no matter what their financial background. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Numerous individuals are of the opinion that

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overnment should ensure that all the individuals from different financial strata

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the opportunity to pursue higher

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free of cost.

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essay agrees with

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view and I intend to justify it in the following paragraphs.

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and foremost,

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is one amongst the most essential need of the contemporary world as it decides people's career. And higher cost of university

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will force lower strata people to quite it or they will not be able to get the admission.

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, inequality amongst the society will increase and the rich will become richer and vice versa.

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, if an individual from

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underprivileged family background is unable to pursue higher

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then

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he will not get a job. And

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, it will

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result in

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ecline in his financial status.

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to that, unavailability of

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university

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for

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poor people will increase the unemployment amongst them. And

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, there are high chances that they will indulge in criminal activities to sort out their financial issues.

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will cause disharmony in

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society.

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, studies show that 75% of the

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did

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rime so that they can resolve their life's problems which are due to the cash shortage. To conclude,

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overnment should fund the university

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to make it free for everyone despite

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their financial status so that they have the equal rights of getting employment.

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eduction in

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nemployment rate will surely

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the crime in the society.