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Many people are travelling to other countries. Why? Is it a positive or negative development?

#people #countries #development
It is true that nowadays people tend to
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to
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overseas. There are various negative effects that these countries have to face, but I believe
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 movement is worth and the positive will be outstanding. Many social problems will be seen more clearly if many people migrate to a country.
Firstly
, migrating would lead to an increase
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 population lack of accommodations would make house cost soaring. In fact, most of
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 living cost higher smaller countries. Another effect is that crowded areas often
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 traffic congestion, so it is hard for
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citizens to travelling.
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also
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 to
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worse air pollution, which is caused many health problems of the residents.
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positive influence
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 undeniable development. The large city would have massive Human Resources. In
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metropolis
, there are many
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 to developing both individuals and cooperations. Some
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potential
 industries, In conclusion, I believe migrating to other countries has its own positive and negative sides but that country would have the development in various ways.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • affordability
  • accessibility
  • cultural exchange
  • global connectivity
  • economic contributor
  • environmental impact
  • cultural erosion
  • infrastructure
  • overtourism
  • global perspective
  • socio-economic implications
  • career opportunities
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