Most artists earn low salaries and should therefore receive funding from the government in order for them to continue their work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Artists
are not paid as good remuneration like many other professionals.
Therefore
, some people opine that
artists
are eligible to receive governmental backing to pursue their career. I partially
support
their stance, yet I believe it could disrupt some developing land' budget.
This
essay will analyze the reasons for my opinion combined with some examples. Art embodies a nation's culture and is pivotal to magnify it and
artists
deserve equal financial appraisal as many other respectable professions do. A doctor,
for instance
, earns a handsome wage for serving humanity. But when it comes to paying an artist, government and private companies act ungenerously while considering art as a less significant
work
. Though an artist, whether a canvas painter or an actor, whoever represents a country on a global level should be paid enough for his
work
, or he would be disappointed with his profession and might change his field to earn a better livelihood.
Subsequently
, a country would be deprived of an asset.
Thus
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developed region should monetarily
support
their
artists
to continue to gain benefits from them. Contrarily, some
countries
have a limited financial budget to fund the
artists
only. Because there are some other neglected professions too that require equal financial attention.
Therefore
, funding the
artists
due to their low income could
also
trigger other professionals to demand financial
support
from the government. Take farmers
for example
, who sweat their blood to foster the agricultural infrastructure of a country, yet are not warmly rewarded in a poor land.
That is
why
,
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funding the
artists
by the government seems to be possible for the empowered
countries
only. Underdeveloped
countries
lack enough budget to
support
such
occupations.
Thus
, their salary should
instead
be raised to enable them to live comfortably. To recapitulate,
artists
are paid less than they deserve and can be financially supported by wealthy
countries
. Undeveloped
countries
,
however
, can adopt other measures to grant
artists
. Their pay can be raised in consideration of their services. So that the artisan could fulfil their passion for
work
and in return,
countries
could be treasured from their
work
.
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