An old car was left on the street near your street several weeks ago. The car is now causing a problem for residents. Write a letter to the Council. In your letter: Describe the car. Outline the problems it is causing. Tell the Council what you want them to do about it.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to complain about a car parked on the street for the past few days which now causing a problem for the residents. It is a blue colour MG car, and the model is RX5 which is parked next to the parking area. Not only the number plate is missing but all the

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punctured so we are unable to push the vehicle. We have limited parking lots in my area and one of them is occupied by

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car permanently. In

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way, it is causing us trouble to find another parking nearby.

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,the motor which is parked is very narrow and curved on the street so the people who live in

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area have to take a different route in order to reach the supermarket. I would request the council to remove the vehicle from that place as soon as possible and take the necessary action against the owner by asking them to pay a fine for troubling us. I hope you will understand our situation and take

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action immediately.

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you in advance for your consideration. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Venkatesh Ravichandran

crvenkatesh1904Thu Dec 08 2022

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Language Accuracy

Make sure to use correct verb forms. For example, instead of saying 'which now causing a problem,' it should be 'which is now causing a problem.'

Coherence

Consider breaking longer paragraphs into shorter ones for better readability. For instance, the second paragraph could be split into two to separate the description of the car from the problems it causes.

Task Response

While it's good to request the council to take action, providing a bit more detail about why action is necessary could enhance the letter. You could discuss the potential risks posed by the abandoned car more clearly.

Coherence

The letter has a clear structure with an introduction, body, and conclusion.

Task Achievement

The writer uses a polite and formal tone appropriate for a letter to the council.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

202 words

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