Some people think that technology makes life complex, so we should make our life simpler without using the technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, it is often suggested that

people

's

lifestyle

is complicated by the advent of technological advances. Some

people

argue that

people

should reduce the usage of electronic products because of maintaining peaceful lives. Personally, I agree that the benefits of

lifestyle

without modern

technology

, which ensures positive health condition and proper

relationship

among others.

To begin

with, health problems obviously demonstrates the matter pertaining to the theme. According to developed scientific

technology

,

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chronic diseases and stress have

been occurred

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to the public.

That is

because

,

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people

tend to put on too much attention for other's life patterns for competing with the wealth and

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of others or commenting vicious sentences that would be the main reasons

of

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illness.

Moreover

, It is convincing that these diseases would transpire the complication of

lifestyle

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such

as hospital expenses or hiring lawyer.

For example

, a person should go to

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ospital for caring mental problems because of social media for a lifelong span.

Therefore

, to feel secure and relaxation citizens should prefer to live

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the

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lain

lifestyle

, not using

technology

. On top of that,

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xtremely extended personal

relationship

clearly depicts the issue at hand. Indeed, in recent years,

people

could keep in touch with international

people

for using new technological programs and make a new friend even strangers. Frankly, the public does not need to contact the entire of friends which would be complex to their

relationship

, but they actually tend to concentrate on plenty of data and information of others. Definitely, it would be interrupted individual spare time which could get peaceful by making meals with family and meeting with closest friends in what are more valuable citizens' lives.

Hence

, needs for reorganizing personal connection lucidly explains an epitome of why I am in

favor

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of reducing

technology

use. In conclusion,

although

it may seem that cutting-edge

technology

would bring

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aluable

lifestyle

, to maintain health and positive

relationship

people

should reform to utilize

technology

, not relying on too much.