As countries develop, their populations tend to live individually or in small family units. In your opinion, what are the causes and what are the effects on both individuals and society as a whole.

Nowadays, it is often suggested that family size has become smaller by social advances. Some people argue that the main reasons

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issue are the low birth rate and living prices. Personally, I agree with

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relevant influences on personal lifestyle and political industry.

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are pregnancy proportion obviously demonstrates the main problem in our society. More importantly, the number of

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family is a rise rapidly that most family

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not have spare time to care for their newborn babies.

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, family size has been reduced by

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case.

In addition

, living expenses are expensive to live with the entire family in

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rban city.

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eparate house from their offspring. As shown, birth rate and living costs clearly

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adverse influences to the

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in recent years. On top of that

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there are several impacts on

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social change. For individually, the public tends to mingle with peers or friends rather than

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amily member.

Furthermore

, the importance of flesh and blood has diminished by public media.

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, one of the popular TV programs in Korea depicts that living alone ensure

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erfect lifestyle, without

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artner. Aside from that, as the countries aspect, the economic problem lucidly comes out from the low birth rate and an ageing society.

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are necessary not only the government. As

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glance, it may seem like that these problems are not severe matters.

However

, the government and related organizations should implement public hearing and advertising to the public how much critical it will be a long run to our society.

Therefore

, I feel that residents should figure out the real situation and try to handle cooperatively.