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Some people believe that it is better to live and work in a vertical city with multiple tall buildings, as compared to a horizontal city with fewer tall buildings. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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It is true that the construction of high-rise
buildings
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 has become a relatively new phenomenon in many cities around the world. IN MY VIEW, these tall structures offer a variety of benefits to residents. There are two main reasons for defending why living in a vertical city is the optimal choice.
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, high-rise
buildings
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 provide a sensible answer to the problem of urban housing;
for example
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, in Singapore and Hongkong where land is scarce and its price is astronomical, the government encounters difficulty in housing a growing population. These apartment
buildings
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 can effectively accommodate more
people
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 in the city.
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, the population density of the high-rise
buildings
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 encourages more facilities and services for residents,
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 as public transport and sports centres which are aimed at these communities.
On the other hand
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, opponents may argue that the traditional type of city is a better place to live in. Many
people
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 would prefer a traditional house with a courtyard or a garden because it allows
people
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 a sense of belonging to nature, especially the elderly. Traditional houses are usually designed with an opening space in front of the door so that
people
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 from within a community can easily communicate with their neighbours.
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, it is
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 safer for the low-rise building occupants to live and work, compared to living in a tall apartment or an office building, in case a fire or an emergency occurs. In conclusion, choosing an ideal place to live depends on a combination of factors, among which there are convenience and affordability. I believe high-rise
buildings
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 are a very positive solution to the prospective problems resulting from urban development.

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