Billions of dollars are being wasted on space research. The money used could be better if used to improving condition on people on earth. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Most scientists are inclined to execute various experiments for exploring

space

, but these experiments seem quite being wasteful. Personally, I agree that has been mentioned above. In

this

essay, I will elaborate on an argument

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why the subsidies should be afforded to other sections for the earth.

To begin

with, practical investment obviously demonstrates why the

government

should quit supporting

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the

space

research. As background knowledge, the main purpose of

space

exploration is for the historical achievements

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from

each country.

Therefore

, the

government

and relevant organizations should focus on

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the

realistic situation.

For example

,

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environment

mitigation and the lack of

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nature

resources that could be

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ppropriate investment for Earth's situation.

As a result

, to utilize money wisely, the

government

should implement practical investment, not on the universal place. On top of that, to alleviate environmental pollution, it

also

needs huge budgets to recover our environmental.

However

, these costs could transpire the unexpected benefits

such

as the revision of soil condition and clean water which are very useful for humanity.

In addition

, due to the lack of

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nature

resources, more and more scientists should invent replacement ingredients and materials. As shown

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these cases, the

government

should induce professions to address those

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realistic

problems. In conclusion, as

first

glance,

space

exploration is necessary goals as humanity.

However

,

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for

in the future, the

government

and related scientific experts should regard

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the

environmental issues.

Thus

, I feel that it is

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c

onvincing statement that it explains why international administrations should evade wasting money on

space

.