Billions of dollars are being wasted on space research. The money used could be better if used to improving condition on people on earth. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Most scientists are inclined to execute various experiments for exploring
space
, but these experiments seem quite being wasteful. Personally, I agree that has been mentioned above. In
this
essay, I will elaborate on an argument
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why the subsidies should be afforded to other sections for the earth.
To begin
with, practical investment obviously demonstrates why the
government
should quit supporting
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the
space
research. As background knowledge, the main purpose of
space
exploration is for the historical achievements
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from
each country.
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, the
government
and relevant organizations should focus on
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the
realistic situation.
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,
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environment
mitigation and the lack of
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nature
resources that could be
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a
ppropriate investment for Earth's situation.
As a result
, to utilize money wisely, the
government
should implement practical investment, not on the universal place. On top of that, to alleviate environmental pollution, it
also
needs huge budgets to recover our environmental.
However
, these costs could transpire the unexpected benefits
such
as the revision of soil condition and clean water which are very useful for humanity.
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, due to the lack of
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nature
resources, more and more scientists should invent replacement ingredients and materials. As shown
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these cases, the
government
should induce professions to address those
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realistic
problems. In conclusion, as
first
glance,
space
exploration is necessary goals as humanity.
However
,
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for
in the future, the
government
and related scientific experts should regard
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the
environmental issues.
Thus
, I feel that it is
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c
onvincing statement that it explains why international administrations should evade wasting money on
space
.

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