Psychological illnesses may not be as obvious as physical disabilities or illnesses, nevertheless they are just as disabling in their own way. Society, however, is more accepting of those with physical than psychological illnesses or disabilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Psychological illness is a very serious disorder, but still,many communities ignore it and most humans
try to avoid the sufferer having mental issues. the society having psychological trouble often need more care and love to heal themselves. In my opinion,we, as a society should accept these patients and support them. There are so many Mental issues nowadays, like insomnia, stress, personality disorder which are not considered as major diseases.
, a person is effected on a big scale, suffering from any psychology disease.
For instance
, a recent study done by scientist shows a remarkable declined performance with patients having sleep disorders as compared physical injuries like a fracture. It is
said that mental stress is more harmful than the physical one. In spite of having a strong effect on human health due to psychology disorder, our community still does not accept these people. They are always ignored and treated disrespectfully. In my opinion, knowledge should be provided to humans about the seriousness of the psychological illness.
For example
, in South Africa, campaigns were run to promote awareness about mental health diseases and their treatment. People were found more sensitive towards the victim later. We as a 1humanity should be more open and accept
disease with a broad mindset. I think if people have more information about these problems than they will be able to accept the patients having a mental illness.

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