Watching TV shows and movies about crime is becoming more and more popular. Why is this? What effect does that have on society?

In recent years, movies and
tv
series
which is showed
violence
content are increasing day by day all around the world. There are several reasons why these kinds of films become common.
First
of all, it is an undeniable fact that producers tend to make violent movies
in particular
in
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ast years. It is obvious that a great number of people are watching these types of contents because individuals are looking for attraction.
For example
, In my country, one of the most prevalence
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tv
series
is kurtlar
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vadisi
. It is easy to estimate, kurtlar vadisi consist of murder, harassment, killing. Unfortunately, as the number of viewing increased,
tv
managers continues to shoot the
series
. In short, there is a strong relationship between
violence
and views.
On the other hand
, the majority of individuals expose outrage theme in a wide range of application
such
as Netflix, Blu
Tv
, Public
tv
. It is
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well-known effects are psychological behaviours like aggression manner, depression, anxiety. The huge impact on not just adults but
also
children.
For instance
, children tend to say curse their peers and family. it can be observed by family behavioural changes easily,
In addition
, Some adults resort the violent their partners because
tv
indicates that
violence
is normal towards the
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pouse
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As a result
, many people ranging from children to old people are affected from which watched badly. All in all, taking all the above-mentioned points into consideration, fighting and killing have become more common in all
tv
series
. That’s why
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governments should do best in order to curb the relating to crime and
violence
.
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