Some people believe that one should not be allowed to work after age of 65, other believe that they should be allowed to work for as long as they want. Discuss both sides of view and give your opinion.

There is currently a contentious argument over the permission for

people

after 65 years old to

work

. In my perspective,

this

controversial issue depends on various aspects, especially job

demandings

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demanding

demands

and workers’ ability.

This

essay is going to examine

this

preference and analyze my opinion. On the one hand, it is undeniable that senior

people

have much more experience, not only in

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orkplace but

also

in society.

In other words

, they have built up a broad knowledge when it comes to compared to younger generations.

Therefore

, I quite believe they are more likely to meet the demands of fields which need carefulness and understanding. Taking Japan as an example. We could see a huge amount of seniors, including over 65-year-olds is still working hard in some majors,

such

as hand-craft industries, local tour guilders.

Moreover

, the

olders

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holders

might become headliners teaching younger workforces to sharply improve their skills. Turning to the other side of the argument, we are living in

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competitive era while there is an enormous number of high-end technologies. What I mean by

this

is

that young generations

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have more opportunities to learn and apply modern devices than the

olders

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holders

older

.

Thus

, it

is seemed

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that old

people

who cannot adapt to the quick changes of the world could not be allowed to

work

in these majors. For an instance, IT, one of the most prospect fields, is significantly developing day by day in recent years. It makes a wide horizon for youngsters more clearly than the

olders

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elders

holders

older

who are too hard to keep in pace with the developments. In conclusion,

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permission for old

people

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to

work

is evitable. I myself believe that the

olders

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holders

have their own values in some fields of

work

so that allowing them to

work

could bring a lot of benefits.