you have seen an advertisement from a couple who live in Australia, for someone to trach their children your language for a year write a letter to the couple. in your letter explain why you think you would be suitable for the job say what else you could do for the family give your reasons for writing the job
Dear Sir and Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to express my desire to teach your children my language for a year if you do not mind.
I would be grateful if you would teach them a new language, however
, let me tell you about my responsibilities in this
job. I have some strategies for teaching kids and I have taught for 4years. As well as
I got a prize from the education facility to a great teacher.
as you know the families prefer a display teacher as do I also
I have a flexible schedule with kids to become delighted in their lessons. The classes are very fun with joyful missions and at the end
of the week I will send you a report as feedback for them to know about them plus next week's plan.
However
, when I left my job I had free time and I insisted on teaching the children to help them and practice my last
job. In addition
, I feel free when I do my occupation these methods are beneficial and conserve my knowledge not only
Correct word choice
apply
this
but Correct determiner usage
apply
also
expand my understanding more
.
I look forward to receiving your responses.
yours faithfully
MonirahCorrect quantifier usage
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Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure the letter has a clear introduction, body with distinct paragraphs, and a suitable conclusion. Every paragraph should begin with a topic sentence and explore a single idea.
Coherence and Cohesion
Stay on topic and ensure each paragraph contributes to the overall purpose of the letter. Avoid including irrelevant details.
Task Achievement
Maintain a consistent and appropriate tone throughout the letter. The tone in this letter is mostly suitable for the context.
Task Achievement
Fully address all parts of the prompt. Make sure to explain your suitability, offer additional services, and clearly state your reasons for wanting the job.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite