you have seen an advertisement from a couple who live in Australia, for someone to trach their children your language for a year write a letter to the couple. in your letter explain why you think you would be suitable for the job say what else you could do for the family give your reasons for writing the job

#advertisement #couple #australia #someone #trach #children #language #year #job

Dear Sir and Madam, I am writing

this

letter to express my desire to teach your children my language for a year if you do not mind. I would be grateful if you would teach them a new language,

however

, let me tell you about my responsibilities in

this

job. I have some strategies for teaching kids and I have taught for 4years.

As well as

I got a prize from the education facility to a great teacher. as you know the families prefer a display teacher as do I

also

I have a flexible schedule with kids to become delighted in their lessons. The classes are very fun with joyful missions and

at the end

of the week I will send you a report as feedback for them to know about them plus next week's plan.

However

, when I left my job I had free time and I insisted on teaching the children to help them and practice my

last

job.

In addition

, I feel free when I do my occupation these methods are beneficial and conserve my knowledge

not only

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. I look forward to receiving your responses. yours faithfully Monirah

Submitted by M on Tue Dec 19 2023

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Coherence and Cohesion

Ensure the letter has a clear introduction, body with distinct paragraphs, and a suitable conclusion. Every paragraph should begin with a topic sentence and explore a single idea.

Coherence and Cohesion

Stay on topic and ensure each paragraph contributes to the overall purpose of the letter. Avoid including irrelevant details.

Task Achievement

Maintain a consistent and appropriate tone throughout the letter. The tone in this letter is mostly suitable for the context.

Task Achievement

Fully address all parts of the prompt. Make sure to explain your suitability, offer additional services, and clearly state your reasons for wanting the job.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

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secondly
thirdly
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moreover
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for example
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therefore
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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

199 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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