Today, some young people say that their mobile phones are the most important thing they own. Do you think that the popularity of mobile phones is a good or bad thing?

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ery crucial thing for the

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among all other

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like laptop and desktop. It is always the debatable issue that whether it is boon or bane for youngsters. Personally, I think that the mobile phone is not of any worth for

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its usage results in the significant reduction in their studying habit and playing mobile is unhealthy too.

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get lost within mobile if they get it and do not care about their study. In another word, the online games, social

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, and so many things on it

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for a longer time and they forget about their task.

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used to be so dedicated and

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when there was no any cell phones ,but ,in present days they have access to it and

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they have become

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and less focused on their study.

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ell phone has become

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worst invention for them as it is distracting them a lot from their studies.

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issue is the most serious issues which

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risk due to the use of mobile phones.

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with, playing video games via the mobile does not really

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physical movement

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most of the youngsters spend sedentary lifestyle. Eventually , they get suffered from various kind of disease in their early age.

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, watching the screen of mobile for a long time may cause

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certain eyes problems like eye irritation,burning eyes and blurred vision. To exemplify , there was one student of mine , who used to

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at his mobile for most of the time, sitting on his sofa. Unfortunately, he went through so many

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problems like overweight, and early age diabetes.

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obile phone is not suitable for a child, if we consider it wisely from the

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. In conclusion,

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it might be beneficial for adults

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totally worthless for

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due to its negative impact on their reading habit along with impaired

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situations originated from the use of it.