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Topic: It is better for college students to live far away from home than live at home with their parents. Do you agree or disagree?

#topic #college #students #home #parents
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It is true that plenty of
students
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 will live far from home as they continue higher-education.
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, some
students
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 still live with their
parents
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.
This
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 questioned an argument that whether living far from home or staying with
parents
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 is better. On the one hand, living independently is completely terrific for
students
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 because it makes them tackle
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various issues in their lives that they might never think of before.
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,
students
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 would have to learn to balance their finance, which is the most vital thing to help them survive until the end of the month. In fact, they must allocate a certain amount of their money properly on hundreds of expenses,
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 as accommodation expense, foodstuff expense…
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, they would have chances to build interpersonal relationships when living without
parents
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. These social relationships could benefit
students
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 in their career later as well as teach them the way to communicate and take care of
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 surroundings.
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, saving-money and safety are
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ain reasons for others to live with their
parents
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.
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, living together can reduce the burden on their budget monthly due to the share of different things between members
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 a family.
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, if a father and a son travel to work and school by the only vehicle, they can save a large amount of money to buy another means of transport.
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,
students
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 living with their
parents
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 could avoid exposure to unclear and toxic relationships better than those living far family.
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, they can have a healthy lifestyle and spend more time to do the domestic chores and care of their
parents
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. In conclusion,
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students
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 can take a variety of advantages when living with
parents
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, I agree that it should be better for them to stay away from home and experience many challenges that they have never met before.
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