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In some countries, the government pays unemployed people on a weekly basis. How this would impact people as well as government? Do you agree or disagree with that?

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There is a common tendency for a multitude of
countries
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 to allocate their financial resources to support unemployed
people
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. While
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 is a beneficial
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 for those humans, it could drastically affect societies, as well as state
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. The following essay will examine
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 impact and I will
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 explain why I completely agree with these statements.
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 with, from a human's perspective, the main factor which detracts from the positive aspects of
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 a tendency is the fact that it limits the possibilities to develop other significant social institutions. To put it differently, the enormous amount of money, which is given to
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 who are struggling to find their job, can be allocated to health or educational systems, as from my point of view, they have a higher priority for many
countries
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. As a case in point, recently, in Russia, the government has decided to alter the distribution of financial resources by reducing the budget for the construction of local educational establishments and
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, increasing the same for
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, which provide unemployed
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 with support.
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, it would potentially entail the complications with available places at schools for a variety of children.
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, by giving money to unemployed
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 state
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 would encourage them to stay in the same social position, and it could aggravate the economics of
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, each government has to obtain the required level of income in order to maintain a stable economical situation. To illustrate
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 point, there is a pressing issue nowadays in the USA, as the staggering number of
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 would not like to work, but the state
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 will provide them with the necessary financial resources.
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, a million
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 do not pay their taxes, and the country's budget is slightly being reduced. In conclusion, we are all too familiar with the movement to aid financially unemployed
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 within many
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. I strongly believe that it occurs the pressing problems for governments and societies, as it stops the improvement of other valid sectors and exacerbates the financial situation of
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • unemployment benefits
  • financial support
  • basic standard of living
  • essential needs
  • economic stability
  • job seeking
  • government expenditure
  • reallocation of funds
  • dependency culture
  • consumer spending
  • income inequality
  • safety net
  • public resources
  • workforce productivity
  • substantial resources
  • social equity
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