“In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.” Do you agree or disagree?

Most
people
agree that
cars
are essential and take part for society. Particularly, I recon in the near future there will be many
cars
than today. I completely agree with these claim for tree reasons:
urbanization
,
second
increase the
technology
and
third
inability of public
transport
.
First
of all, the developing world is rapidly urbanizing, which means that more and more
people
there will be drive to theirs for workplace.
For example
, the city which I live is constant build up, the major built several bridges and long roads. After those constructions the ancient track doesn`t exist any more, so I have to
use
my car to arrive in my company. The
urbanization
has had a role important in our life.
Furthermore
, with the build up of the
urbanization
, the
technology
follow these growth.
For example
, usually has had news about electric
cars
between us, how
people
using more and more theirs
cars
, the industry created
cars
moved by common electricity, it is amazing since price of the gas increase each six months, but
this
cars
still pretty expensive.
Also
, we must to talk about how functional is public
transport
.
For instance
, I live in Brazil, when has colossal cities, more specific I have lived in Petrolina, when the temperature while the year is scald. There is not subways, only busses ( busses that has been rebuild and modernized).
However
, these vehicle there is not AC (conditioning air) so is almost impossible
use
public
transport
offer by town hall. In the final analysis, increased to
use
of
cars
will be remarkable in the
next
twenty years. Because it is impossible fight against the spread the
urbanization
and
technology
. Unfortunately, the public
transport
doesn´t follow up the
technology
, in Petrolina. So, more and more
people
will be
use
theirs
cars
.
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