It is better to go out for a live performance (a show or concert) than stay at home watching TV or using computer. To what extent d you agree or disagree?

There is a common impression that going out for a
live
performance
like a show or concert is better than stay at
home
watching TV or computer. I fully agree with
this
statement, and the following essay will explain my point of view.
Firstly
, Computers have the option to pause a
live
video stream and
this
feature is a great benefit when the viewer's attention gets diverted during a
live
presentation due to some unforeseen circumstances.
For example
, Parents who watch a movie in theatre along with their children, often miss some part of that movie while trying to keep their children quiet.
However
, People who watch digital content at
home
can halt the video stream whenever they want.
Therefore
,
this
feature of computers and smart televisions would give any viewer a better satisfaction of watching complete shows.
Secondly
, we can avoid the effort related to travel when we watch any
live
performance
through a television at
home
.
Moreover
, travelling to some places would need prior paperwork like Tourist VISA approvals.
For instance
, we can watch any show
that is
hosted in any country using the internet without the need to travel to that location. So, viewing any
performance
from a
home
theatre would help us avoid travel-related problems. To Conclude, It is not better to go out for
live
performance
than watch that
performance
on TV or computer while staying at
home
. and I fully support the same point of view for the reasons of ability to pause any show as well as watching it with better clarity.
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