You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: say why he/she would not enjoy going to college explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ...................,

Dear Shally, I hope you are in pink
of
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your health. In your
last
letter, you
have
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mentioned that you are confused
whether
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to go for
post-gradutaion
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post-graduation
or start looking for work. I would suggest
you
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that it is better to start a job in your field as
this
would add to your resume. You have completed your
bachelors
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in Interior Design and have already done a
six month
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long internship with an Architect and you have thoroughly enjoyed
while
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working.
Therefore
, I do not think you
will
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now like to go back to classes and study after getting hands-on experience in the field.
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, you are not thinking
to become
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a professor for which there might have been
requirement
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of higher education.
Therefore
, now start looking for
job
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and look for roles like junior Interior Designer or you can even go for Furniture Designer's role as you have
interest
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in furniture making Interior
Stylist
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in brands like West Elm
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also
a good option. I hope my advice will help you to
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a decision soon. Let me know about it in your next letter. Give my regards to Uncle and Aunty. Love Bindiya
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grammar and mechanics
Consider varying your sentence structures to enhance readability, and review for occasional grammatical errors such as 'post-gradutaion' which should be 'post-graduation'.
coherence
Though there is a clear logical structure, try to ensure smoother transitions between points.
task achievement
You've provided a thorough response addressing all parts of the task prompt.
tone
The tone is appropriately friendly and supportive, suitable for writing to a friend.
paragraphing
The paragraphs each focus on a single idea, which contributes to clarity.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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