Some people say that when buying a product (e.g. a mobile/cell phone), or choosing a service (e.g. medical treatment), price is the most important thing to consider. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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, the price is the vital point when we choose a product or service we may and should also
consider other elements like guarantee, brand awareness, quality
, user reviews, usability etc. First
of all, we have to ensure that the product corresponds to our requirements, like functional and non-functional. For example
, if we buy a mobile phone
it would be a good idea to ensure that the phone
can establish and support good mobile connection, supports the latest GPRS standard, can take photos, and has GPS. It will not make any sense to buy a phone
which can’t satisfy your basic needs which you are buying it for.
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To conclude, most of the time the highest price does not mean the highest quality
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite