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the most important consideration when choosing any career or job is having a high income. agree or disagree?

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It is argued that while choosing a career or effort the high
wages
 is given more priorities. I totally disagree with
this
 trend.
This
 essay will discuss why people have to choose the activity for their relief rather than choosing a job with the rate of
wages
. In the one handsome, people might think money is everything so they have to choose those work which confers a large amount of money.
This
 is because
this
 might think for prosperous improvement wealth is everything.
Moreover
, they might believe the only way to live a happy and high standard of the heart is a rich success.
For example
, recent research concluded that 90% of individual select their career by looking at the salary package. So, most of the nation people do the business which bestows mammoth amounts of
wages
 rather than procrastinating the work for their Inner achievement. In the other hand, population think job gratification is more crucial to living a happy and peaceful growth.
Furthermore
, without professional pleasure,the public cannot have serious mental effect in their activity.
For instance
, a recent study concluded that a majority of the community suffer from frustration and mental illness because of a dearth of amusement in their task.
In addition
, folk can be contented only if they are happy with their performance what they are doing. So, in my opinion, to develop one career and task the population should be more concerned about their inner peace with the work they perform rather than only considering the money in
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ob. To exemplify, a community who had studied engineering might be indulged in business only to earn more wealth rather than being statist from inside.
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, these types of
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trend will obviously give wealth but no happiness from inside.
Finally
, the public
also
 can do better performance in their task they are not happy from inside. To conclude,
although
wages
 are crucial to living a high standard of activity I believe inner peace and vindication is more essential to do better performance in growth. It bestows the individual happy and healthy soul always.
Submitted by Sabu  on

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • financial security
  • job satisfaction
  • long-term happiness
  • personal fulfillment
  • financial stability
  • passion
  • quality of life
  • work-life balance
  • career advancement
  • societal impact
  • income disparity
  • material success
  • monetary compensation
  • wealth accumulation
  • economic well-being
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