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Some people think that the news media nowadays have influenced people’s lives in negative ways. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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News
media
 is indeed very significant nowadays because without the
news
media
 we would be totally in the dark and cut
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 from the rest of the world. According to me I partially agree with the statement. The press has
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egative influence on our life. I believe that
media
 doing a great service to us and whatever negative effect it has is negligible if we compared to
benefur
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benefit
 of the mode of
news
. To embark on, in today’s era
media
 provides information about even surround the world with the help of
media
 we get knowledge about what is happening
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 on the globe.
However
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ode of
news
also
 shapes our opinion it is a link between government and the individual. It spread’s culture and
life style
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. To illustrate, India’s culture is famous because it comes under
media
 coverage. With the help of
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we get to know about
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olitical leader because we cannot meet
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the person directly. On the flip side, there are some negative aspects. Preliminary, mass communication invade the privacy of famous people. Sometime mode of
news
 give fake
news
 and they telecast again and again.
Moreover
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ew time it shows the violence and vulgarity and electric generalism effect on us. To recapitulate, it can be reiterated that it
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 various merits and demerits for some people it is a good source of knowledge.
On the other hand
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 adverse
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 human’s life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • contentious
  • sensationalism
  • misinformation
  • exaggerated reporting
  • public panic
  • fake news
  • public opinion
  • social media platforms
  • erosion of trust
  • journalism
  • cynicism
  • polarized society
  • democratic processes
  • public discourse
  • media literacy
  • critical thinking
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