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Some people say that using smartphones should be banned in most schools. Do you agree or disagree with that?

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Few people say that the use of
smartphones
 must be prohibited in all schools.In my opinion,I agree that using
smartphones
 should be banned .But I do
also
 believe it is a mode of communication. Schools imposing a ban on the use of
smartphones
 is definitely a good start ,which is due to a number of reasons .
Firstly
 ,It results in low performance of the student.
Furthermore
,They are getting addicted to the games being played
smartphones
.
Moreover
, the mode of communication is
also
 very important for some parents.As they are worried about their child .
For instance
,a school bus is delayed due to traffic,at
this
 moment the child can inform their parents about the unexpected situation occurred.The child can report to their parent if he or she is not well. In conclusion ,I strongly believe that the use of
smartphones
 should be banned.
However
,I suggest the schools report the parents updated that the student has arrived school safely and
also
 report his attendance regularly.
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