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Some museums and art galleries charge admission fees, while others have free entry. Do you think the advantages of charging for admission outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Museum and art galleries are very important to preserve history and cultures of the country. In
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 reather than free
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. There are many advantages of applying
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 to the museums and art gallaries.
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, the money collected in
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 form will be usefull to maintain thier infrastructure and collections.
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, the New Taipei Museum runs by own funding
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 it has attarctive artifacts and portraits in comparison to Taipei Government Museum which has free
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 and government funded.
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, if these are paid
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 they are bound to have some exhibitions and other attractive programmes so that they can pull more visitors - especially students - to learn about their histrorical and cultural understandings. Applying
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 to these centers
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 have few disadvantages:
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 some rich
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 can visit these sites without thinking about money, some poor
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 and students deprived of getting knowledge about their culture; another disadvantage is that curators have no enthusiasm in arranging events and taking care of due to less audiences.
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, these
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 can be supported by government aids to see these historical sites and they can still gain knowledge of ancient culture. In conclusion, it is advantageous to charge admission
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 to museums and art gallaries in maintaining and exhibiting shows;
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,
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 have some disadvantage of attracting less
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 and remain away from gaining knowledge. But, advantages outweigh disadavantages because students get better opportunity to learn about their history and culture as these sites are well-maintained and up-to-date.
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