Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football, while other people think that taking part in individual sports, like tennis or swimming, is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is no doubt playing sports have a positive impact on people's lifestyle. While some people believe playing

sport

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teams

such

as football has more advantages to them,

others

argue that participating in

an individual sports

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individual sports

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,

such

as tennis and swimming provides more

merites

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merits

.

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essay will discuss both sides of

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rgument, and why I agree with the former view.

practicipating

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participating

sport

individually would increase their concentration in improving themselves.

This

is because they will not distract by their team members,

thus

it enables them to accurately analyze their performance.

As a result

, they could draw

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public attention to their abilities, which motivates them to

excert

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exert

more effort toward the achievement of their dreams.

For instance

, Nadel

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, who is a famous tennis player, were able to

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multiple awards because

this

sport

has made him more focused on stimulating his development and building a successful career in

this

field.

However

, I would go against

this

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perspective

because it puts enormous pressure on the athletes and increase their depression.One of the significant benefits of

practicipating

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participating

in a

sport

with

others

is that it has enhanced their social skills. Not only does encourage them to communicate with

others

, but

also

teachs

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teaches

teach

them to understand

others

' behaviour.

Moreover

, citizens learn how to share their effort and coordinate with their teammates.

This

is resulted in developing a strong relationship with their peers. To illustrate

this

, if the players in a football team want to

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a match, they have to learn how to pass a ball to their teammates and

collaberate

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collaborate

effectively with them. In conclusion,

although

playing an individual

sport

would teach human how to focus more on developing their skills, I would disagree with

this

because it increases their stress and consumes their energy.

Therefore

,

sport

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teams

has

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more benefits because it develops human communication skills and

strengthen

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their bonds with their mates.