Despite the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this case? What can be done about this problem?

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nvention in agriculture, today, there are
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the same and their probable solutions. In
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urrent age, the
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ame pase. And excessive growth of public
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hole crop.
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xtra gap of 10%.
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tendency
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food
. It is noticed that in marriage, birthday or in any other functions,
food
is made more than the actual requirement, due to which the spare
food
is thrown in the dustbin, which could satisfy the starvation of a hungry
people
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roblem, there is a solution
also
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government
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collaboration
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umber of Non-profit organisation should plan the event that
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people
to control the
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gap between produce and consumption can be
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nullified
modified
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Furthermore
, the public should be penalised with over and above the actual price of
food
and extra
food
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conclude
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innovation
of agriculture can be advantageous with full fledge only when there is control upon
population
and
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wastage
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food
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