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To meet the growing need for food by an increasing population, a country should make use of genetically engineered foods. However, some people believe that such foods are not only unhealthy but affect the nature too. Discuss both the viewpoints and give your own opinion.

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With the rapid increase in population resulting in the never-ending demand for
food
, some section of people advocates that genetically modified
food
 is the answer, while others believe that it might actually be a curse for the masses and the environment. I assert that altering the gene make-up of plants, using biotechnology might prove more harmful than a boon to the human race.
This
 essay will discuss
this
 issue by using relevant examples to demonstrate points and support arguments.
Firstly
, from an economic perspective, GM
food
 could be costly.
Furthermore
, pesticides and herbicides use increases. These pesticides are poisonous for the people as well as for the wild-life.
For instance
, in South America, pesticide spraying is causing serious health problems for the people as well as for other forms of life.
Consequently
,
this
 might culminate into some chronic diseases or it might even lead to new diseases in the future generation.
Secondly
, the long term effects of GM foods are still a matter of research.
In addition
, they might prove to be toxic to certain organisms,
such
 as bees and butterflies.
For example
, research has shown that bees, being an important pollinator of many
food
 crops, might endanger their existence.
Therefore
, many developing countries across the world are moving towards ecological farming, which might be a better and safer way to feed the poor and hungry. To conclude, I believe that GM crops do affect our health and well-being in spite of the
Food
 and Drug Administration claiming that they are safe. The claim of ending the world hunger is false, as it is not caused by a shortage of
food
 production but by sheer mismanagement and lack of access to eatables brought about by various social and political causes.
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