Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Many people around the world are facing various challenges in life
such
as an unsatisfactory
job
or shortage of money.
As a result
, some believe that they should accept a bad situation while others that it is relevant to try and improve
such
situations.
This
essay will discuss both the arguments, as well as , provide my perspective. On the one hand, people who do not have the courage to face the worse situation, tend to accept
such
circumstances. The main reason
behind
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this
is that they have a lot of family responsibilities. To illustrate, if a
person
is the only earning member in the family,
then
he has a lot of burden
such
as education of siblings, maintenance of
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ouse, paying electricity bills and due to
this
fact, he
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even dare to improvise the bad situation and keeps on working even if he is not satisfied. Another reason is that some think that if we leave an unsatisfactory
job
,
then
there will be no certainty in future.
On the other hand
, some optimistic people try to make situations better because they believe in themselves and they want to be a successful
person
in life.
For example
, if a
person
leaves a
job
in search of good opportunities ,
then
he will definitely get a
job
in which he is really satisfied and emerge to be a successful
person
. To conclude, in my opinion
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it is always good to try improving difficult circumstances because if we take
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isk in life it will always be fruitful and
also
one of the positive aspects is that we will always get experience while trying new ways.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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