Recently, your position in the company has changed, and accordingly, you are required to write a letter to ask for some corresponding training programs that contains the following information: • What was your last position? • What qualities does your new position require? • How does the training help you in your new position?

Dear Mr. Sinan My name is Fatih Emir Yalçındağ from your company. I writing to you about my new duty to our company. Maybe you know my department and duties changed. Before ı worked in the spare parts office and now ı will work in the technical services department ı liked my
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duty but ı really so bored worked that office.
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you know ı wanted
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ı am so glad about
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change and ı should say thank you so much for accepting my request. I started my job in
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department for two days but ı think my experience is not enough
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reason if possible ı want one more thing if could ı go to a course or an education ı think ı can be a better service staff because now ı can’t do fully my responsibilities. I said
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to my chief he said you should talk
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with Mr. Sinan. I respect your decision and waiting for your positive response ı want some things will become better. Kind regards

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coherence and cohesion
Use clear paragraphs for each main idea to make your letter easier to read.
task achievement
Make sure to use complete sentences and correct grammar for better communication.
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Be more specific about the training you want and how it will help you.
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You expressed your gratitude and motivation for the new position.
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You mentioned your desire for training, showing your willingness to learn.

Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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