Prision is a common way in most countries to solve the problem of crime. However, a more effective solution is to give people with a better education. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, various organizations are volunteering to help prisoners to improve their life state while in prisons. Vocational courses or rehabilitation has been offered so that during their time of release it will be easy for them to look for a job. providing prisoners and giving them a chance to change will lessen the
crime
is increasing enormously in the countries and people believe that a person who committed c
rime will be better off in prison. While others think that rehabilitation and education programs would be an essential approach for people who commit felonies. In Add an article
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essay, I will discuss why educational schemes are very important to avoid someone from committing crimes
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To start with, minimizing crime
these days is a very difficult problem to solve as more and more individuals are keen to do such
ill doing
. I believe poverty and illiteracy are the main reasons why some of us are not afraid to break the law. Add a hyphen
ill-doing
For instance
, a person who is poor will highly likely commit sins that are against the law because they have the need to survive. Poor education contributes to this
as well since I think they are not well informed regarding the punishments that they might get by doing heinous crimes
. For these two reasons, citizens will highly likely act improperly due to lack of money and education to support themselves.
On the other hand
, if you ask me, offering an educational program while the person was inside the prison will be immensely beneficial when they are trying to change or correct their wrong doings
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, if they gain practical experience it will unlikely for them to go back to do ill crimes
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In conclusion, citizens think it likely that prison is the answer for people who committed c
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that we are experiencing right now.Submitted by mhelrose.alfaro193 on
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