Anyone can use a mobile phone to answer the work call and home call at any place, or 7 days a week. Do you think there are more negative or positive effects on both individuals and society?
Mobile phones play an important role in the modern era.
People
are allowed to be connected anytime, anywhere. Some people
think this
phenomenon is harmful to the individual or society. However
, in my perspective, the positive effects
overweight the negative effects
of both individuals and society.
Understandably, some people
think answer phone
call everywhere have negative impacts, bring distraction and restless. For example
, calls came from family members at work time will interrupt the concentration. Indeed, people
even get frightened when getting a call from the boss in their leisure time, because it might mean their vocation will get canceled
by emergency work. Change the spelling
cancelled
However
, phone
call side effects
will be controlled by setting rules like family members only call for essential and emergency events.
I heavily believe e
ven though there exists a few side effect, benefits are more than disadvantages. In society, the call allowed employees in companies to communicate efficiency and benefit for the economy. Add a pronoun
that
For instance
, an officer might cost several hours to respond when sending an email in a complex context, but a phone
call will get an immediate answer, people
save their time at work. As for the individual, If people
carried cellphones, they know they will receive a phone
call during a critical situation. So they can make sure there are no things to deal with and enjoy resting instead
of checking email frequently.
In conclusion, there are harmful effects
like break concentration and anxiety about the boss' call. The overall benefit is higher caused by improved communication efficiency, and people
are informed quickly during emergencies.Submitted by junyimen on
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