The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
bar chart illustrates the amount of electricity
which was used for the
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apply
production
and consumption by top
ten countries (Correct article usage
the top
China
, United States , Russia , Japan, India, Canada, France, Brazil, Germany, Korea
) in 2014.
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and Korea
Overall
, China
ranks first for the consumption and production
of electricity
, moreover
, the lowest amount is used and produced by the country Korea
. Additionally
, Russia was nearly equal in the production
and consumption of electricity
.
In 2014 , China
was ahead of all the countries in production
which was 5,398 billion kWh
and also
, for the usage of electricity
which was 5,322 billion kWh
. The lowest amount of electricity
consumed is by the country Korea
which is 455.8 billion kWh
,moreover
, electricity
which
was produced by Germany in a minority which is about 526.6 .
There was not a quite difference between the usage and manufacturing of Correct pronoun usage
apply
electricity
by the country Russia which was about 19 kWh
and similarly
this
was with countries such
as China
and Korea
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