We live in a world of technology these days. While the internet brings with it clear advantages, the problems in terms of control and security of information outweighs the advantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The use of technology able to provide advantages.
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help
us to work Change the verb form
helps
more
easier as a task can be completed Change the word
apply
immedietly
and accurate. Correct your spelling
immediately
An adoption
of technology like Remove the article
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Iinternet
deliver so many benefits. Correct your spelling
Internet
Hence
, i
strongly agree that the usage of Change the capitalization
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Internet
had provides subtantial
benefit because the information searching become fast and precise. Correct your spelling
substantial
For instance
, typically a
university students require to use Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
I
nternet to find Add an article
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nswer for their assignments and without the usage of the Add an article
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an
internet
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,
In addition
, I
nternet not only regards to find Add an article
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anwser
it Correct your spelling
answer
also
help
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helps
people
to conducted online meeting and online call. These approaches help people
to manage a meeting without physically attend to
a meeting location. Verify preposition usage
apply
For example
, the use of application widely known as google meeting help people
meet
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meets
via
online. Verify preposition usage
apply
Besides
that, the Internet
lead
to Change the verb form
leads
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mergence of online shopping. The online shopping sell Add an article
the
everthing
that provide more items to select and compare than Correct your spelling
everything
a physical shops
. Correct the article-noun agreement
physical shops
a physical shop
This
help people
to acquire many options to purchase and execute price comparision
.
Correct your spelling
comparison
On the other hand
, the internet
allows people
to browse news from other countries which make people
aware about
the current situation Verify preposition usage
of
happend
in that country. Correct your spelling
happened
happen
For instance
state election and financial status. The usage of the internet
lead
to the emergence of e-sport Change the verb form
leads
such
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as
people
to plays with many people
regardless of location. In addition
, I
nternet help Add an article
the
people
to acquire online education. Nowadays online education became a new norm for people
to obtain knowledge compare than in person
meeting. Add a hyphen
in-person
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opted by many knowledge Correct your spelling
platform
hunter
due to it is Change to a plural noun
hunters
a
fast and easy to learnChange the article
apply
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to
tradisional
approach.
To conclude, Correct your spelling
traditional
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nternet has many advantages as it Add an article
the
help
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helps
people
to gain stuff and information much easier. In future, it is expected that the Internet
help people
to obtain many benefit
form different type of angle.Change the noun form
benefits
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