You have a problem with the computer at the office which has affected your work Write a letter to your manager and say What problem do you have What difficulties does this create for you What could be done about it.
Dear sir,
I am writing
this
letter to draw your immediate attention towards my laptop,which has been given to me for work from home.
To begin
with, my name is Parthkumar Parmar and I am working in the quality department at your company I joined this
organization just last
month. Moreover
, I have concerns with my laptop, because it is not only working slowly but also
the microphone is not working.
Moreover
, these difficulties may impact my performance,such
as I am unable to attend the meeting,which was held last
Friday. Apart from
this
, I have to spend more time on the computer to finish my daily work and it shows my irregularity.
Lastly
, I am sincerely requesting you to look into this
issue and provide me an
alternative option to deal with Add the preposition
with an
this
situation.
Please contact me for any other information.
yours sincerely,
ParthSubmitted by pp6859 on
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task achievement
Make sure to include details on any prior attempts to troubleshoot the problem, as this adds depth to your task response.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that all paragraphs have clear topic sentences and that ideas within paragraphs are connected logically.
coherence cohesion
The letter is structured well with a clear opening, body, and conclusion.
task achievement
The tone is polite and suitable for formal communication with a manager.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite