Most medical doctors want to work in cities where they will make a lot of money. Yet in many rural areas there are not enough doctors. What are the reasons for this problem? How can it be solved?

Physicians wish to stay in the suburbs as there are sufficient chances to earn huge wealth. Still,there are not sufficient quacks in the rural area.
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essay will discuss the causes of
this
trouble and
also
provide some solutions to avoid these problems. The foremost cause of abiding in cities is not to grow up
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endency to serve all kind of people. Commercial thinking intends a
doctor
to stay in the town.
Firstly
, most of the physicians consider if they stay in the city they can earn a lot of money.
Secondly
, to be a rich man in a very short time is now the main motto of their lives.
Thus
, they have to engage themselves to do any doctoral works in the town. The possible solution is to create a huge number of government job field so that they do not feel the insecurity of their tasks.
For instance
, if a
doctor
presumes he would earn more wealth, he wants to attach himself in the city life. To chasten it should be given in his mind to serve for all kinds of people and get rewarded
then
he would not rinse himself to think of earning more money. Another reason for
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uture security of their lives. There are more aristocratic people who live in the suburbs area. As a consequence, it would be easy for them to do their doctoral profession in a flexible way. Not only that they have to do the physician tasks at the same time but
also
they have to create their offsprings future aspects well. To protect
this
, the government must ensure a quack's son or daughter bright future wherever a
doctor
go.
For example
, a physician wants to like professionalism behaviour which they get in the town. To create an alternative, the government must build better institutions in the rural area so that a
doctor
's offspring can study there well and ensure there hereinafter lives. In conclusion, getting not enough money and honour is the main reason to stay in the suburbs. To ensure their security is the best possible way so that a quack can practice their doctoral tasks.
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