Some people think that hard work helps in achieving financial success while other thing it is not lead to financial success. discuss both of use and give your opinion

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ajority of
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that a person could be financially successful by working hard while
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do not support
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with, working hard is key to success and
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can get profit financially if they perform their duties with full concentration and with hard
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, working hard seems
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an achievement for those who get promoted in their jobs and get higher wages. To illustrate, one of my friend who was working as an assistant in Subway is now a manager at Subway and he is getting paid three times more than before.
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was because of his tough grind
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because he used to
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overtime and
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whenever his supervisor needs any employee in the placement of absence worker, he was always available. He focussed on
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ob, standing whole day, taking orders and delivering them.
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, some professionals
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as political leaders,
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hard for the country. They sometimes do not have time for their families and friends and serve the country with their full attention and hard
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and they are financially rich.
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, gaining higher economic wealth is not always because of hard
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, these days many individuals who have skills,
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experience and who are paying their full attention
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the career and jobs are not always wealthy. To illustrate,
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who
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as janitors, all the time they put their efforts to clean the area and during their whole shifts, they
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so hard. These workers still are at minimum wages in many companies.
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, discrimination, racism against different sexes, colour and genders is increasing drastically nowadays. Sometimes skilled workers who have
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are still unable to get promoted at jobs because of their ethnicity and co-worker's behaviour towards them, so it is not always the case to be financially rich with hard
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. In my point, it is the reality of
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contemporary world that hard
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is not connected with money, because of social issues and workplace discrimination,
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do not achieve what they want. To conclude, taking everything into consideration, some
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ood fortune can get
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success with the promotions and by working hard. I believe, discrimination and other ethnicity issues at
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, do not lead
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towards success or wealth even if individuals are working hard.
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